mysticalsoul
Seeker
In the circle of Illusional thoughts
Posts: 43
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Post by mysticalsoul on Jul 27, 2006 19:03:21 GMT -5
BlackWaters Walking in the darkness of lonelyness I decide to talk to a friend To see the opinion of my thoughts But why should I care, why should it matter Am I looking for answers, am I needing to follow Is it an instinct of who we are Looking to cross The BlackWaters To go and swim for my answers But, to be dissapointed at the end I should know WHY! But always seeming to ask,for that pathetic opinion, of why? BlackWaters Swimming back and at the end I see two Great Hounds Waiting to judge you Rubbing their opinion to the point of hurting you But leaving with the satisfaction, of knowing that you understand, Why. BlackWaters
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Post by wiccafairey on Jul 28, 2006 8:20:02 GMT -5
VERY NICE
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Post by Senbecc on Jul 28, 2006 8:40:49 GMT -5
BlackWaters Walking in the darkness of lonelyness I decide to talk to a friend To see the opinion of my thoughts But why should I care, why should it matter Am I looking for answers, am I needing to follow Is it an instinct of who we are Looking to cross The BlackWaters To go and swim for my answers But, to be dissapointed at the end I should know WHY! But always seeming to ask,for that pathetic opinion, of why? BlackWaters Swimming back and at the end I see two Great Hounds Waiting to judge you Rubbing their opinion to the point of hurting you But leaving with the satisfaction, of knowing that you understand, Why. BlackWaters It is very nice to see your poetry again Mystic.
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mysticalsoul
Seeker
In the circle of Illusional thoughts
Posts: 43
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Post by mysticalsoul on Jul 29, 2006 17:27:09 GMT -5
Aww thanks guys.
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shaamansu
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We walk our paths softly in light and beauty.
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Post by shaamansu on Aug 2, 2006 18:44:04 GMT -5
Mys sees things in ways many of us don't. I am honored that she shares with us. She is my friend.
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mysticalsoul
Seeker
In the circle of Illusional thoughts
Posts: 43
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Post by mysticalsoul on Aug 24, 2006 13:27:30 GMT -5
Mys sees things in ways many of us don't. I am honored that she shares with us. She is my friend. Awwww I love you many Shaam.
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